Thoughts on Research Project

I have been thinking so much this past week trying to find what i will ultimately be talking about in my research paper; what my interpretive claim and thesis will oficially be and how will i connect my body paragraphs back to my main point? Now that it is Sunday and recently ideas have been broadened, i have a general sense of what it is going to be like. I will research the new movie Red Riding Hood. My intro will be somewhat like this:
        Little Red Riding Hood is different than most other fairy tale stories. It veers away from the common theme of enchantment and magical wonderment and provides a more important moral lesson as it also strives to educate children about society and the “real world.” Children would be better served by a fairy tale if given a message that is more beneficial to their knowledge and safety than an unrealistic story indicating that every life ends up “happily ever after.” The newly produced movie picture version, Red Riding Hood, in a more adult context, brings to eye these safety warnings that you cannot trust everyone you meet and not everything is as it appears. This new movie examines what is more crippling to the human psyche, fear of the unknown or false understanding of the familiar as the menace resides in, not a conniving, wild and unpredictable animal, but rather in a scheming human being masquerading as the fearsome canis lupus.
       
What do you think?